Class Feedback

In class today, my teacher arranged the class in 5 groups so that each person can present their project in each group and receive feedback from the people. It is a great opportunity to clear the air if you have doubts about anything in the project that you question. It also helps you know what thing to change to make the project better. It gives the author or director a better perspective of the audience's view of the project.

Based on my classmates' feedback, they all said that the actual project was good. There was just minor things that would make my project better. For example, they said that the right side of the page is basic. That the layout should be more interesting, like maybe put the pictures and text in different sides so that way it will create some sort of pattern. Also, have the pictures in different sizes so they're not all the same. The last advice they gave me is that if I want my pictures to be similar as the pictures in my blog post called Planning Part 2, I would need a digital camera so that the pictures would be sharp.

I want my photos to be sharp, but the issue is that I don't have a digital camera. The closest I have is my iphone 6. I will see if maybe anybody I know has a digital camera, but if I can't find a digital camera, then I won't have any choice but to use my phone. And honestly, I think I can make the photos look really good with the use of my iphone.

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